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01What the first line is for
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02[Opener 1 we would cut]
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BEFOREI hope this finds you well. My name is Sam and I work at a leading staffing agency.
AFTERSaw your three warehouse roles went up on Monday.
03[Opener 2 we would cut]
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04[Openers 3 to 5]
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05What to write instead
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[Pull quote from the post]
[Author name][One line about the author]